O playful God!
I am your submissive puppet
but I am ought to be unhappy
stereotyped to perform
dejected, gloomy, despondent
Be fair !
give me a chance
I can make you glee
in your darkest hour
with my blissful act
we both unaware
of my million dollar smile
25 thoughts on “Conversation with God”
When all fails, then I am an actor in your merciless play, the heart of an atheist sees how her destiny is your mangled prey, with confused sounds of hymns I cast my command on thee, turn the hands of time and set this non-believer free
Beautiful and strong!
ah, loved reading this one.. imagining God as an Entrepreneurial character… banking on your million dollar smile.. 🙂 x
That’s all I’m left with to serenade him 🙂
Hows you doing today?
a bit slow. as if the day hasn’t kick started… on my second mug of coffee hoping it’ll work… Bazzzooom!! 🙂 You ok? xx
Ditto to dat!! 🙂
Think subject. Let us both attempt at our respective ends. What say?
Need a push plugin 😉
told you my mind was slow, .. 🙂 still trying to think of a subject… ’tis unusual for me , as I usually just flit and land as a butterfly, from one idea to the next.
Ha Ha! My first time too. Quite nervous on afterthoughts 😉
mm..gimme something to read from your blog.
just an idea… rewind life itself?… what would you revisit or desire to change?
Ah! Fabulous idea 🙂
I’m in. So how do we go about it? We finish and ….
You figure out what’s next.
Yikes!! I’ll have to engage my remaining brain cells and actually THINK? . 😉 … So, … we’ll let each other know when our respective poems are complete?… with a get -out clause in case my/your/our mind blows?.. 😉
No easy get out clause. Kettle blows “No new posts from either until submissions” 😉
ready when you are.. 🙂 . I’m working today (’tis 8.54 in the morning ) … so I’ll keep checking for a reply when I can… What a difference, thinking up a poem to order… Phew!!
I digressed. Its 1.36 in the afternoon and I’d like to inform you my last 22 hours was a unique time travel into a dark hole, suffice to say I’m numb and wasted.
😉 … you time travelled? … into your past? wow!!
Not past. A dark hole. I have a deep urge to tell you about my last 22 hours but first let’s get over with this.
As I said, I digressed. Not sure if I can claim what I wrote is a poem as promised. I failed. Do we share it here? Who goes first?
no failure talk… ‘words is words’ and I love words, .. 🙂 … are we just gonna ‘post’ our own pieces on our sites as updates?. Then we can each view what came to mind from the subject?.
Oh no! Not me.
You do that. I’ll post it right here whenever you please. I gather you ready to hit publish. Do it asap. The wait is killing!
erm… it’s only a poem. 🙂 .. and it’s on my laptop not this PC… so It’ll have to be this afternoon when I get home… (11.20am at the mo …) I’ll let you know as soon as I post it.
well,… I’ve just posted my offering on Options on rewinding life… Didn’t go the way I thought, but then , my poems never do.,, 😉
Step by step
I traced backwards
My life in question
What would I like to change?
“Anything” was my dear friend’s suggestion
I hit a firewall right at start
I’m going through a bad patch
Currently, you see!
So I let my mind wander
Dig in the past, random
Moments of joy, mind reported
Are bleak and unworthy
But not the times
I sunk low
Can I get a drink please?
Thank you dear
Stuff I wish never happened to me
So many, which one do I pick?
But consider this, if I change anyone
Alters following events in my life
There’ll be new memories
“Stop” screamed my heart
“I’m hurt too much for new hurts…
Give it up, just let it be
We’ll be fine…Have faith
I got you and you got me”
Loved this, Arjun, it says it all from the heart, .. you should post it….
I can put it in your comment box if you like. Not in the state of mind for a post.
I would be honoured, honest it’s really much better than my thoughts.. more personal.. x
Self indulgent rather. Yours is mellow and comprehensive, far better than me.