“FERNANDES!”
call out for fernandes
you’ll meet a fernandes
any restaurant or a bar in Goa
you got to find one
maybe two
i had but found a forsaken table
in a odd corner
by a stupid well
propped up with a drab metal bucket
an old portuguese house, now a colonial cafe
“Infantaria”
i dread stepping alone
in joints like such
that has no bar counters, no bar stools
no barkeeps
but a table of two or worse four
i needed a drink badly
“FERNANDES”
“Was I loud?”
Puny nose, squeaky eyes
lips like two thin blades
chop-chop monster frowning at me
MEAN
“fernandes, large rum and a beer pint.”
i sneaked a glance at her
her fiery eyes glued on me
waiting for a sign
any sign to tear me apart
“ahem..fernandes, get me a repeat, i hate to wait”
two on table no 6
i could hear her squirrel
black halter, back facing me
curvy neck
few strands of hair
waving me hello
guy with her was smothering his belly
severe case of ulcer
table no 5
tender face, nice smile, gentle eyes
paused on me
i let her go
she was cute
i had to
table no 11
two quiet couples
mid-life crisis
right then
she walks in
and I liked her, very much.
strawberries chimed on her fluttering feathers
streaks of red splashed on my cheeks, a blush
I couldn’t take my eyes off her
I didn’t want to
Her loose white shirt
top two buttons undone
she looked at me
i smiled
she smiled back
lit a cigarette
surfed her bag
pulled out a book
Please Turn Over. Continue….
The author had her
“FERNANDES, repeat…DOUBLE IT”
🙂 I was waiting for you
Clanmother, do i need the last line or should I do away with it?
Keep it – just as you first wrote the words. There are times when you want to feel happiness twice over. I especially like that you had her pull out a book. There is always room for a book …
blogging saves enviroment. Adagio -)
I like the way you describe places, environments because they form a clear image in my mind. I have never been to Goa so I see it through your words. It sounds like a very interesting place to live…
Yes! I. LOVED. THIS.
Goa is a Portuguese egg, right? Beauty seems biased to Portuguese places.
Yup. Beauty seems to be biased everywhere an unpublished author/blogger goes. Especially me
Words dripping with texture and sexual tension. Interesting place. Fernandes, I’ll have what arjun is having…
Well, I did re-edit quite a bit to make it wordpress friendly. I will be more than happy to have your company but I think it’s time you be the “Author”
Don’t usually finish a poem. Loved it and your “liquid courage.”
I don’t visit the poetry section either.
My liquid courage has been justified at least in this situation.
By the way, she did bear a strong resemblance to you…Cheers!
I think Portuguese is one of the most beautiful languages in the world. It doesn’t hurt that my hero, Pablo, writes in it. Lovely and entertaining ( amusing as well) this image you have created. The picture sadly reminds me of Cubans trying to make their way through the Florida straits to freedom.
in whatever makeshift vessel they can manufacturer. Very well done!
Thank you! I was wondering if i should make my way to florida in a makeshift vessel, since you haven’t visited my blog last 4 days -)
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